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Write a short composition about a memorable weekend activity you took part in. Describe what you did, who you were with, and how you felt. Word count: 60–100 words.

- Word count discipline: stay within ±10% of the target. Going much over loses points. - Vocabulary scope: stick to your textbook word list. Out-of-scope words aren't rewarded. - The Power column below only swaps in-syllabus words.

A memorable weekend activity

The boring draft

Score: ~12 / 15 (B band)

Last Saturday I went to a community garden with my classmates. We had said to help plant trees for an environmental project.

The morning was hot, but everyone was really excited. We dug small holes, put young trees inside, and made the soil firm around each one. Our teacher said us that every tree makes oxygen for years to come.

By noon I was tired, but happy. I learned that small actions can make a big difference.

The power upgrade

Score: ~14 / 15 (A band)

Last Saturday I travelled to a community garden with my classmates. We had agreed to help plant trees for an environmental project.

The morning was scorching, but everyone was extremely excited. We carved small holes, placed young trees inside, and filled the soil firm around each one. Our teacher reminded us that every tree provides oxygen for years to come.

By noon I was exhausted, but fulfilled. I realised that small actions can create a lasting difference.