Your school is running an English writing competition with the theme "Remembering a good friend and describing friendship." Write a short essay about a good friend of yours, including who the friend is, one thing you remember together, and why this friendship is important to you. Write at least 50 words. (Beijing zhongkao 2024, Option 2)
A good friend — English writing competition entry
The boring draft
Score: ~12 / 15 (B band)
My best friend is Ming, who has sat next to me since Year 7. He is nice, patient, and always ready to help.
I will never forget the day before our maths test last spring. I was very worried because I could not understand one chapter. Ming took the whole lunch break explaining every step, drawing little pictures in my notebook. I got a good mark the next day.
What I like most about Ming is that he never laughs at me when I make mistakes. A good friend makes you brave, and that is what Ming does for me.
The power upgrade
Score: ~14 / 15 (A band)
My best friend is Ming, who has sat next to me since Year 7. He is kind, patient, and always willing to help.
I will never forget the day before our maths test last spring. I was very anxious because I could not understand one chapter. Ming spent the whole lunch break walking me through every step, drawing little pictures in my notebook. I earned a good mark the next day.
What I treasure most about Ming is that he never mocks me when I make mistakes. A true friend makes you braver, and that is what Ming does for me.