"Writers often grant the most powerful voice in a work to a character who has been denied power elsewhere." Discuss with reference to two of the literary works you have studied. (IB English Lang & Lit, Paper 2, 1h45 SL / 1h45 HL — comparative essay)
Paper 2 comparative essay — power and voice in two literary works
The boring draft
Score: 10 / 20
The proposition that writers grant the loudest voice to the least powerful character is, on its surface, sentimental. It says a literary universe in which justice is at least notionally available — in which the silenced eventually speak, and the speech itself constitutes a kind of reparation. Both Toni Morrison's *Beloved* and Arthur Miller's *The Crucible* test this proposition rather than confirming it. In each, the character with the most arresting voice is also the character most thoroughly stripped of social power; but the voice is not, in either work, a happy compensation. It is, more hard, the residue of a power that has been used against the speaker, made into language by the very pressure of being denied other forms of expression.
In *Beloved*, Sethe, an escaped slave living in 1873 Cincinnati, is the most legally and socially powerless adult in her own household. The novel opens with her established status as a haunted woman in a haunted house, both literally — the ghost of her dead daughter inhabits 124 Bluestone Road — and structurally, in that the institution of slavery has kept itself on her body in the form of the chokecherry-tree scar across her back. Morrison's narrative technique, however, gives Sethe a big narrative voice: long passages of free indirect discourse let the reader to hear her thoughts in their full, unsentimental complexity. When she finally tells her killing of her daughter — "If I hadn't killed her, she would have died" — the syntax is short, declarative, and morally hard than any abolitionist polemic. The very economy of Sethe's voice is the index of her dispossession; she speaks this way because more elaborate speech has been historically denied to women like her. Morrison's authorial choice to render Sethe's inner life in this clipped, decisive prose is not a reward. It is a representation of the cost.
A similar dynamic works around Tituba in *The Crucible*. As an enslaved woman in colonial Salem, Tituba is, formally, the lowest-status speaker in the play; she is seen as both racially other and socially negligible by the Puritan community whose hysteria the play looks at. Yet Miller gives her, in Act One, the play's first crucial declarative speech: under threat of execution she "confesses" to witchcraft and names other supposed witches, starting the entire mechanism of accusation that the rest of the drama will trace. Her voice is, in a literal sense, the loudest in the room — it shapes the events of the play more decisively than any of the more powerful adult men. But the voice is not an expression of agency. It is a coerced performance, made under the certainty that silence will mean death. The power Miller grants Tituba is the power of accusation, but accusation is a tool that has been made into her hand by the men who hold genuine power; she speaks because they let her to speak, in the form they require.
The comparison between the two works is sharpened, not made small, by their generic differences. *Beloved* is a novel that uses the interiorities of slowness — Morrison can devote dozens of pages to a single recollection, and Sethe's voice gains its weight from cumulative interiority. *The Crucible* is a stage drama whose voices must do their work in the compressed time of theatrical performance; Tituba's voice gains its weight from the dramatic moment in which it appears and the chain of consequences it starts. Yet both works make the same structural irony: the voice that moves the narrative most powerfully is the voice that has been most thoroughly disabled in every other respect. The reader or audience is invited to register this irony as a critique of the social order, not as evidence of its self-correction.
Each work, moreover, was written into a specific historical pressure that made. *Beloved* (1987) appeared at the height of late-twentieth-century debates over the legacy of slavery, the politics of memorial, and the rise of African-American literary studies as an academic discipline. Morrison's decision to give narrative authority to a formerly enslaved woman, rather than to an external chronicler, is itself a polemical intervention in a long argument about who is competent to represent the slave experience. The novel's epigraph — "Sixty Million and more" — makes the narrative claim to the dead whose voices were not, and could not be, recovered. Sethe's voice, then, is metonymic: it speaks not only for itself but for an archive of silenced lives whose absence the novel refuses to allow the reader to forget. The literary form is, in a precise sense, the only available technology for restoring even a fraction of what historiography cannot. *The Crucible* (1953), by contrast, was written into the immediate political climate of McCarthyism, and Miller's use of Tituba's coerced accusation has, embedded within it, the analogy to the political testimonies of the House Un-American Activities Committee. The voice of the powerless, in Miller's framing, is not only a sociological observation; it is a warning about how the powerful structure the production of testimony to suit their own ends.
A further dimension worth considering is the position the works put for the reader or audience. In *Beloved*, the reader is structurally implicated in Sethe's trauma: Morrison's use of free indirect discourse makes the reader to inhabit, however briefly, the cognitive position of a woman who has killed her own child, and the moral discomfort of that inhabitation is part of the novel's effect. We cannot read the novel and remain external to its moral pressures; Morrison's form makes the option of comfortable distance. *The Crucible* works analogously through theatrical complicity: the audience watches Tituba accuse, and in the same dramatic moment understands that her accusation is rational under the constraints she faces. The audience that sees this rationality is implicitly being asked: what would you have done? The interrogation of the audience, performed silently and simultaneously with the play's surface action, is among Miller's most important achievements. In both works, the voice of the powerless is not for the reader as a spectacle but functions as a mirror in which the reader's own complicities can be examined.
It is worth asking whether the prompt's framing is, in the end, right. To say a writer "grants" voice to the powerless makes a transfer — as if power and voice were separable goods, and as if literature could redistribute one in compensation for the loss of the other. Neither Morrison nor Miller allows this comforting reading. In *Beloved*, Sethe's voice is the precise measure of her loss; her articulacy is purchased, in the novel's economy, by the daughter she killed and the husband she lost. In *The Crucible*, Tituba's accusations start a series of executions that culminate in the death of John Proctor, the very man who has been kind to her. The voice does not heal; it makes further damage. To call this a "granting" is to miss the moral pressure both writers are bringing to bear.
What both works do, more honestly, is to refuse the easy consolation of compensatory voice. The disenfranchised character speaks, but the reader is not let off the hook by the speaking. Morrison and Miller make that we register the disjunction — that power and voice can be temporarily decoupled in fiction without their decoupling in reality. The voice we hear is, in this sense, a present: evidence of an injustice that the literary work cannot itself repair.
In conclusion, the prompt is correct in its observation but too soft in its implication. The most arresting voices in *Beloved* and *The Crucible* do indeed belong to characters who have been denied power, but the relationship between voice and power in both works is closer to bad than to compensation. To register this asymmetry is the task the writers set their readers; to confuse it with restitution is precisely the misreading both works exist to prevent.
The power upgrade
Score: 15 / 20
The proposition that writers grant the loudest voice to the most disenfranchised character is, on its surface, sentimental. It implies a literary universe in which justice is at least notionally available — in which the silenced eventually speak, and the speech itself constitutes a kind of reparation. Both Toni Morrison's *Beloved* and Arthur Miller's *The Crucible* interrogate this proposition rather than confirming it. In each, the character with the most arresting voice is also the character most thoroughly stripped of social power; but the voice is not, in either work, a redemptive compensation. It is, more disquietingly, the residue of a power that has been exercised against the speaker, transmuted into language by the very pressure of being denied other forms of expression.
In *Beloved*, Sethe, an escaped slave living in 1873 Cincinnati, stands as the most legally and socially powerless adult in her own household. The novel opens with her established status as a haunted woman in a haunted house, both literally — the ghost of her dead daughter inhabits 124 Bluestone Road — and structurally, in that the institution of slavery has inscribed itself on her body in the form of the chokecherry-tree scar across her back. Morrison's narrative technique, however, grants Sethe a formidable narrative voice: long passages of free indirect discourse allow the reader to hear her thoughts in their full, unsentimental complexity. When she finally articulates her killing of her daughter — "If I hadn't killed her, she would have died" — the syntax is short, declarative, and morally harder to refute than any abolitionist polemic. The very economy of Sethe's voice is the index of her dispossession; she speaks this way because more elaborate speech has been historically denied to women like her. Morrison's authorial choice to render Sethe's inner life in this clipped, decisive prose is not a reparation. It is a representation of the cost.
A similar dynamic operates around Tituba in *The Crucible*. As an enslaved woman in colonial Salem, Tituba is, formally, the lowest-status speaker in the play; she is imagined as both racially other and socially negligible by the Puritan community whose hysteria the play anatomises. Yet Miller grants her, in Act One, the play's first crucial declarative speech: under threat of execution she "confesses" to witchcraft and names other supposed witches, setting in motion the entire mechanism of accusation that the rest of the drama will trace. Her voice is, in a literal sense, the loudest in the room — it shapes the events of the play more decisively than any of the more powerful adult men. But the voice is never an expression of agency. It is a coerced performance, generated under the certainty that silence will mean death. The power Miller grants Tituba is the power of accusation, but accusation is a tool that has been forced into her hand by the men who hold genuine power; she speaks because they require her to speak, in the form they require.
The comparison between the two works is sharpened, not flattened, by their generic differences. *Beloved* is a novel that inhabits the interiorities of slowness — Morrison can devote dozens of pages to a single recollection, and Sethe's voice gains its weight from cumulative interiority. *The Crucible* is a stage drama whose voices must achieve their work in the compressed time of theatrical performance; Tituba's voice gains its weight from the dramatic moment in which it appears and the chain of consequences it precipitates. Yet both works share the same structural irony: the voice that drives the narrative most powerfully is the voice that has been most thoroughly disabled in every other respect. The reader or audience is invited to register this irony as a critique of the social order, not as evidence of its self-correction.
Each work, moreover, was written into a specific historical pressure that shaped its handling of voice and power. *Beloved* (1987) appeared at the height of late-twentieth-century debates over the legacy of slavery, the politics of memorial, and the rise of African-American literary studies as an academic discipline. Morrison's decision to grant narrative authority to a formerly enslaved woman, rather than to an external chronicler, is itself a polemical intervention in a long argument about who is competent to represent the slave experience. The novel's epigraph — "Sixty Million and more" — extends the narrative claim to the dead whose voices were not, and could not be, recovered. Sethe's voice, then, is metonymic: it speaks not only for itself but for an archive of silenced lives whose absence the novel refuses to allow the reader to forget. The literary form is, in a precise sense, the only available technology for restoring even a fraction of what historiography cannot. *The Crucible* (1953), by contrast, was written into the immediate political climate of McCarthyism, and Miller's deployment of Tituba's coerced accusation has, embedded within it, the analogy to the political testimonies of the House Un-American Activities Committee. The voice of the powerless, in Miller's framing, is not merely a sociological observation; it is a warning about how the powerful structure the production of testimony to suit their own ends.
A further dimension worth considering is the position the works construct for the reader or audience. In *Beloved*, the reader is structurally implicated in Sethe's trauma: Morrison's use of free indirect discourse requires the reader to inhabit, however briefly, the cognitive position of a woman who has killed her own child, and the moral discomfort of that inhabitation is part of the novel's architecture. We cannot read the novel and remain external to its moral pressures; Morrison's form forecloses the option of comfortable distance. *The Crucible* works analogously through theatrical complicity: the audience watches Tituba accuse, and in the same dramatic moment understands that her accusation is rational under the constraints she faces. The audience that witnesses this rationality is implicitly being asked: what would you have done? The interrogation of the audience, performed silently and simultaneously with the play's surface action, is among Miller's most consequential achievements. In both works, the voice of the powerless is not directed at the reader as a spectacle but functions as a mirror in which the reader's own complicities can be examined.
It is worth asking whether the prompt's framing is, in the end, adequate. To say a writer "grants" voice to the powerless implies a transfer — as if power and voice were separable goods, and as if literature could redistribute one in compensation for the loss of the other. Neither Morrison nor Miller allows this comforting reading. In *Beloved*, Sethe's voice is the precise measure of her loss; her articulacy is purchased, in the novel's economy, by the daughter she killed and the husband she lost. In *The Crucible*, Tituba's accusations trigger a series of executions that culminate in the death of John Proctor, the very man who has been conspicuously kind to her. The voice does not heal; it propagates further damage. To call this a "granting" is to miss the moral pressure both writers are bringing to bear.
What both works do, more accurately, is to refuse the easy consolation of compensatory voice. The disenfranchised character speaks, but the reader is not absolved by the speaking. Morrison and Miller insist that we register the disjunction — that power and voice can be temporarily decoupled in fiction without their decoupling in reality. The voice we hear is, in this sense, a forensic exhibit: evidence of an injustice that the literary work cannot itself repair.
In conclusion, the prompt is correct in its observation but deceptively optimistic in its implication. The most arresting voices in *Beloved* and *The Crucible* do indeed belong to characters who have been systematically denied power, but the relationship between voice and power in both works is closer to tragic asymmetry than to compensation. To register this asymmetry is the task the writers set their readers; to confuse it with restitution is precisely the misreading both works exist to prevent.