China gaokao (style of 全国乙卷)2023

You are Li Hua. Your school is going to hold a Chinese culture festival, and your British friend Peter wants to know about it. Write him a letter to introduce (1) the time and place, (2) the activities, and (3) invite him to join. Word count: about 100 words.

- Word count discipline: stay within ±10% of the target. Going much over loses points. - Vocabulary scope: stick to the 3,500-word gaokao syllabus. Out-of-scope words aren't rewarded and can flag your essay. - The Power column below only swaps in-syllabus words.

Inviting a friend to our Chinese culture festival

The boring draft

Score: 14 / 25 (Band C)

Dear Peter,

I am writing to tell you that our school is having a Chinese culture festival next Saturday at the main hall.

The festival will have many interesting activities. You can watch a dragon dance, try handmade dumplings, and learn calligraphy with a teacher. There will also be a special area where you can make your own paper-cuts.

I really hope you can come. I am sure you will find it fun, and a good chance to see Chinese culture.

Please reply soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

The power upgrade

Score: 20 / 25 (Band A)

Dear Peter,

It is my pleasure to inform you that our school is hosting a Chinese culture festival next Saturday at the main hall.

The festival will offer many fascinating activities. You can admire a dragon dance, taste handmade dumplings, and practise calligraphy with a teacher. There will also be a special area where you can design your own paper-cuts.

I do hope you can attend. I am certain you will find it memorable, and a wonderful chance to experience Chinese culture.

Please let me know your decision.

Yours,

Li Hua